Thursday, June 21, 2007

WRITING TIPS for KIBI Refresher "A" 01/07

Dear students,
As previously discussed in the class about giving tips to those who need the most would be a great help, I would like you write any particular tips that you think it will be usefull for anyone.

Not only that you can share new ideas, but also practice the use of sequence markers as part of our learning process in the class is much appreciated.

Write your name and rank at the beginning of your tips. After published your tips, I want you to have a look at our colleagues' tips; take one and analyse it to find the strenght and the room for improvement. Do not forget to address to this particular tips and also put your name on it.

When you find that the tips need correction please provide necessary information and submit to the blog again.

Hope that this will motivate you to learn the writing using simple tasks.

Happy "tipping" folks!!

RN

21 comments:

Anonymous said...

Cpt Rama HB

HOW TO MAKE AN EFFECTIVE SHAKE HAND

First,you should shake your frien's hand gently.Don't be too tight snd loose.Secondly,Keep looking at his eye while you are shaking his hand to show your respect and confidence.Then remember to make a little chat to make a good impress and feeling.Finally, Tell the person that we enjoy the conversation,give a smile and also say thanks.

Anonymous said...

Roni Marzah Karata, ST
Lettu Laut (S) NRP.15003/P

Indonesian people like to eat vegetables, one of vaforite vegetables is cucumber.
I would like to give information about how to served cucumber in order to avoid the bitter taste.
First of all you have to prepare a sharp knife to cut the cucumber, and than cut he cucumber in the top about 1 cm only.
Secondly take the cutten piece of cucumber and rubb to the other piece until the sap come out and foamy.
Than you can peel the cucumber and slices in order to served.
Finally nice and fresh cucumber is ready to served without any bitter taste.Have a try, good luck.

Anonymous said...

Name :Tegar Wicaksono
Rank :Letda Laut (P)NRP.16689/P



Essential tips to reduce your weight


This is an essential tips to reduce yor weight.first of all you must selective with your food that you want to eat,baked or boiled food is recommended instead fryed food.Next you must order light meals in the restaurant which contain less calories.After that never skip meals,eat three to six times a day in smaller portion to avoid getting hungry.lastly continue your effort with using smaller plate at meal time to satisfy your psyhcological need to see full plate and dont forget to doing an sport exerciese...!

Anonymous said...

Nur 'Alimi
Kpt Pnb/526221

TIP ON A LONG TRIP

When you are on a long trip, you have to be aware of your consciousness. I have a tip for you to make you stay awake, while you are driving. First, you must be sure that you are in a good condition. Indeed, you should take a rest at least 7 to 8 hours at night before the journey. Then, you have to find route with interesting object such as mountainous view or seashore view. You may take a short stop every 2 or 3 hours, perhaps enjoy the snack, have a meal or pray. Finally, you have to drive happily and enjoyably by singing or listening to the music.

Anonymous said...

SGT. LAURENS

HOW TO COOK INSTAN NOODLES

That is you need to do in order to cook instan noodles.Firstly, you have to prepare all equipments that are needed for cooking such as a pack of noodles, pan as well as a spoon. Then, you pour enough water into a pan and boil about five minutes. After that, you are able to put noodles and all seasonings into boiling water. Waiting for in two minutes is the next activity.All in all, you are able to take and pour the cooked noodles together into a bowl or the plate that has been available or ready on the table.

Vijjam Wjaya said...

Wayan M. Wijaya, B.Eng
Lettu Laut (P) NRP. 16690/P

Make your black leather shoes glow like a lustrous black pearl!

This is what you need to do in order to make your black leather shoes glow like a lustrous black pearl. First of all, take a piece of facial cotton and dip it into a cup of water. Subsequently, squeeze the wet cotton gently, and then pick a small amount of shoe polish with the wet cotton. After that, coat the entire surface of your shoes with the shoe polish picked by the wet cotton. Finally, wipe the surface of your shoes with the wet cotton in circular motion continuously within 10 to 15 minutes.

Anonymous said...

Name : Taufik Andriadi
Rank : Capt.
Class : A Reffresher



HOW TO MAINTAIN OUR SHALAT SHUBUH


We can use this tips to maintain our shalat in the dawn or shubuh, hopefully. first, we can practice to what Rasulullah had been thought; take wudhu before fall asleep and go to bed earlier, after that, try to roll over our body to the right face and then get pray. But beforehand we should not eat too much when got the dinner, then avoid tea and coffee, next, we may helped by setting an alarm. Finally, ask to the others to shalat in shubuh, start from your family. Have a nice try....!

Anonymous said...

NAME : A. FIKRI DALIMUNTHE
RANK : KAPTEN INF



HOW TO GET THE BODY SLIM



Firstly,We have to get up early before the sun rises and do not
sleep late at night.Then do any kind of sport exercise for more than
15 minutes every day.After that,our times of sleeping must not less
than eight hours a day.Lastly,You do not have much sugar in your drink,
nor do you take much rice in your meal.

Anonymous said...

WILLIS
Second Lieutenant (E) 17704/P


How to Remove and Replace Accu

This is the right way to change you car's accu with the new one.
First, release the negatif pole cable. After that, open the plastic cover of the positif pole and release the cable of this pole. Now, you can remove the old accu and change it with the new one. Next, hook back the positif cable to the pole and close it with the plastic cover. Make sure
it is tight enough. Finally, you may hook back the negatif cable to the pole and tight it also. The new accu is ready to use.

Why you must release the negatif cable first? As you know, our car's body is connected with the negatif pole, so, if you release the positif cable first, it may cause an electrical short.

Anonymous said...

H.M. Kisha
Airforce captain (526297)

a tips how to make a daylasting shine on your daily-work shoes
This is what you have to do :
First of all,brush your shoes with an ordinary shoe polish brush,
dispose all accumulated dirt from your shoes.then,find yourself
a nice clean wet towel and once again dispose all dirt by rubbing
the towel gently on the upper surface of your shoes. after the surface dried,
you can start to polish your shoes with a polish brush, gently.
The next thing you have to do is to do over polish sequence by using dry towel,
until the shoes shining.
Have a try, good luck

Anonymous said...

w.o. sugianto,Toto / 506690

HOW TO SHINE THE SHOES


First of all, you have to clean the shoes from dust with a shoes brush.
Afer that,you rub the shoes with a wet cloth that you have prepared.
Apply the polish shoes by using wet cotton gently on entire surfaces of
the shoes untill beeing shiny.Then,you put them in the sun for about
ten minutes.Finally,you wipe them smoothly by using a cleanly soft cloth.

Anonymous said...

Dear Mr. Rama
Nice tips that you publish, however i still corius about the tips, is the tips can be apllied when we met some one that in the higher rank than us and either for the opposite sex that we try to make special aprochment with her.
I know the best way is just try, however can you convince me more? thank you. Roni

Anonymous said...

SGT.MAJOR.RISGITA
A-REFRESHER CLASS


DO YOU GET A TROUBLE WITH YOUR SHOES?
We have a tip how to make your shoes keep shining
First, clean up the shoes by brushing them use shoe brush clearly
Second, if you are sure no grain on the shoes then applies some polish in all over the shoes
Next, brush the shoes continuously more or less 30 minutes, and do it over so bright that you can see like a mirror.
Briefly, if you got difficulty polishing you may rub by using a silk within a half a hour.
I do believe you have got a nice shoes.

Anonymous said...

Capt Riyadi
KIBI Refresher "A"


HOW TO MAKE YOUR FRIDGE ODOR FREE


This is the way you need to do in order to make your fridge fresh and odor free.
First, clean your fridge with a damp clean towel and use detergent to remove all
the bacteria from your fridge. Then, put a tea spoon of Baking soda in your fridge
to absorb all the smell left, after that use a sealed container to put your daily need
in a fridge. your fridge will not smeel awfull anymore....

Anonymous said...

NAME : M. IQBAL LUBIS
RANK : LETTU INF


HOW TO KEEP YOUR HEALTH

This is the way how to keep your health. The first you must keep
your food and avoid the fats, and then the second way you must
have enough rest, after that you have to take exercise every day,
and the last avoid smoking.

Vijjam Wjaya said...

Dear Ltd Tegar,

Here is my comment to your tips.
I think it makes sense, but I have one question for you : "Does your tip really work? Have ever practiced it?" Hmm....you must have a good body right!

Wayan M.W

Anonymous said...

dear capt M.Kisha
well done mate...
may I meet you to night?I'd learn how to make a good sentences to you
have a nice weekend

Anonymous said...

1 Lt. Imam Wicaksana

Some people may have problems dealing with how to be loved a woman , so i would like to share a tip about it. Here is the tip. First of all, do not bother whether she likes you or not. Be confidence and always think positively. Second you have to show your ability. It means in any kind of activities, for example playing music instrument, doing adrenalin sports, making a poet, etc. Next you have to make a good relationship. In order to make it you need to know all things that related to her. Try to have nice conversations with , a cheerful conversation sometimes brings a lot of advantage to you. As a notice jokes are more helpful.
The last, when the time comes and you think it is the best time to purpose her so do not afraid to be rejected. Do it as a gentleman and let it flows as it should be.

Anonymous said...

Dear Imam

it's a nice tips Imam. I just want to know How did you make your tips. Is it your experience...or...just a dream...

Anonymous said...

Dear Ltt.Wayan

Here my Answer,Yes that tip really work,i have reduce my weight abaut 5 kg in 3 weeks and hopefully i will get a good body.for your tip its really make sense,your shoe must be shine every day did you...?

regard T.Wicaksono

Anonymous said...

TO all my beloved friends..
I wonder,wether we have another topics or not.And I'm expecting to get much money without working!I will really apreciated if anyody has idea....
give me some ideas please..